GOOD
Fire was one way that early humans changed their environment. Fire was a good way to drive animals into places where they could be killed for food and skins. Humans now use fertilizer for plants so there plants could grow better. Humans have had the ability to change the environment for thousands of years. This is because there are more people on earth than there use to be.
BAD
The fire also caused a lot of damage. Many or some people dye because of fire. fire is not good if its around a farming place, it will just kill all your crops. Fire has destroyed a lot of homes and lives.
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you separated the good things from the bad things. I liked you example about the fire. I think over all you did a great job, but I think you should add detail to your writing to give it a more condensed rich taste!